Hello! Thank you very much for submitting your app! Before we can accept you, we'd like the following clarified or expanded upon:

Your personality section needs at least one more paragraph! Some ideas if you're stuck: more on his vigilantism and how it affects his relationships with those around him, why he decided to stop keeping his secret, why he joined (and left) the knights, etc.

There is no mention of Yuri's combat skills. As he is a protagonist in an action RPG, this is fairly important. Please consider updating your abilities section to reflect this!

Also, pets from home usually don't come with characters upon entry. You'll have to wait for an event that allows items/things from home; we try to schedule them every couple months.

Thank you!